​Task Type: Line Graph
Question:
The line graph shows the number of visitors to three different museums in a city between 2000 and 2020.



❌ Sample Answer – Band 5 (Weak)

The line graph shows the number of people who visited three museums from 2000 to 2020. Overall, the number of visitors changed during the period.

The visitors of Museum A increased from 2000 to 2010 and then decreased slightly. In 2000, there were about 300 thousand visitors and this number rose to around 500 thousand in 2010. After that, it went down to about 450 thousand in 2020.

Museum B had about 400 thousand visitors in 2000. This figure went down to 300 thousand in 2005 and then increased again to nearly 450 thousand in 2020. Museum C started with the lowest number and it increased slowly over the years.


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✅ Sample Answer – Band 8 (Strong)

The line graph compares attendance figures for three museums in a city over a twenty-year period from 2000 to 2020. Overall, Museum A and Museum B experienced upward trends despite some fluctuations, while Museum C remained the least popular throughout the period.

In 2000, Museum A attracted approximately 300,000 visitors, and this number rose steadily to a peak of about 500,000 in 2010 before declining slightly to around 450,000 by 2020. A similar pattern can be seen in Museum B, where visitor numbers initially fell from roughly 400,000 to 300,000 in 2005, followed by a consistent increase to nearly 450,000 at the end of the period.

By contrast, Museum C recorded significantly lower attendance figures. Although the number of visitors grew gradually over time, it never exceeded 200,000, remaining well below the other two museums.


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🔍 تفاوت‌ها دقیقاً کجاست؟ (تحلیل فارسی با اشاره به متن)

1️⃣ Overview

در متن Band 5، Overview خیلی ضعیف است: “Overall, the number of visitors changed during the period.” این جمله خیلی کلی است و هیچ مقایسه یا trend مشخصی ندارد.

در متن Band 8، Overview دقیق و تحلیلی است: “Overall, Museum A and Museum B experienced upward trends… while Museum C remained the least popular…” اینجا هم trend گفته شده، هم مقایسه، هم دسته‌بندی اطلاعات بدون عدد.


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2️⃣ انتخاب و گروه‌بندی اطلاعات

در Band 5، هر موزه تقریباً جداگانه و بدون ارتباط تحلیل شده است. فقط داده‌ها پشت سر هم آمده‌اند.

در Band 8، موزه‌ها هوشمندانه گروه‌بندی شده‌اند: Museum A و B کنار هم (similar trend)
Museum C جداگانه (contrast)


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3️⃣ زبان و واژگان

Band 5:

تکرار زیاد: “increased”, “number”, “visitors”

افعال ساده و تکراری


Band 8:

تنوع واژگان: “attracted”, “attendance figures”, “recorded”

استفاده از collocationها مثل: “experienced upward trends” “remained the least popular”



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4️⃣ دقت گرامری و ساختار جمله

Band 5:

جمله‌ها کوتاه و ساده

تقریباً همه active و basic


Band 8:

ترکیب جملات ساده و complex

استفاده طبیعی از linking و contrast: “By contrast”, “despite”, “although”



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5️⃣ Task Achievement

Band 5:

اطلاعات هست

تحلیل ضعیف

Overview ناکارآمد → سقف نمره پایین


Band 8:

Overview قوی

مقایسه واضح

انتخاب داده هوشمند → نمره بالا











Task Type: Map
Question:
The maps below show the changes that took place in a small town between 1990 and 2020.
❌ Sample Answer – Band 5 (Weak)
The maps show the changes in a small town from 1990 to 2020. Overall, the town changed during this period.
In 1990, there was a park in the center of the town. There were some houses on the east side and a small road in the south. In 2020, the park was removed and a shopping center was built. More houses were added and the road was developed.
There was also a school in the north in 1990 and it stayed the same in 2020. The town became more modern over time.
✅ Sample Answer – Band 8 (Strong)
The maps illustrate how a small town was transformed over a thirty-year period between 1990 and 2020. Overall, the area experienced significant development, with the replacement of green space by commercial and residential facilities, while some features remained unchanged.

In 1990, the town centre was dominated by a public park, surrounded by a limited number of residential buildings, particularly on the eastern side. A minor road ran along the southern part of the town, and a school was located in the northern area.
By 2020, the park had been completely replaced by a large shopping centre, marking a shift towards commercial use. In addition, the number of houses increased noticeably, and the road in the south was expanded to accommodate heavier traffic. Despite these changes, the school in the north remained in its original position.
🔍 تفاوت‌ها کجاست؟ (تحلیل فارسی با اشاره به متن)
1️⃣ Overview (مهم‌ترین تفاوت)
در Band 5: “Overall, the town changed during this period.” این Overview خیلی عمومی است و هیچ نوع تغییر خاصی را مشخص نمی‌کند.
در Band 8: “Overall, the area experienced significant development, with the replacement of green space by commercial and residential facilities…” اینجا نوع تغییر دقیق گفته شده:
development
replacement
contrast بین تغییر و ثبات
2️⃣ نوع زبان (Map-specific language)
Band 5:
زبان توصیفی ساده و روزمره
افعال تکراری: “was”, “were”, “built”, “added”
Band 8:
زبان مخصوص Map: “was transformed” “was dominated by” “was completely replaced by” “remained unchanged”
📌 این دقیقاً همون چیزیه که اگزمینر دنبالش می‌گرده.
3️⃣ سازمان‌دهی پاراگراف‌ها
Band 5:
اطلاعات 1990 و 2020 قاطی شده
ساختار زمانی واضح نیست
Band 8:
پاراگراف دوم: فقط 1990
پاراگراف سوم: فقط 2020
تغییرات خیلی شفاف دیده می‌شوند
4️⃣ مقایسه و کنتراست
Band 5:
مقایسه خیلی محدود
بیشتر گزارش ساده است
Band 8:
contrast واضح: “By 2020…” “Despite these changes…”
هم تغییر گفته شده هم ثبات (school)
5️⃣ Task Achievement
Band 5:
نقشه توضیح داده شده
اما تحلیل ضعیف و Overview ناکارآمد
Band 8:
همه تغییرات اصلی پوشش داده شده
Overview تحلیلی
زبان آکادمیک و دقیق












Task Type: Process Diagram
Question:
The diagram below shows the process of producing electricity from solar panels.
❌ Sample Answer – Band 5 (Weak)
The diagram shows how electricity is produced using solar panels. Overall, there are several steps in this process.
First, the sunlight goes to the solar panels and energy is produced. Then the electricity goes to an inverter and it changes the energy. After that, the electricity is sent to the house and used by people. Finally, extra electricity is sent to the grid.
This process is simple and produces clean energy.
✅ Sample Answer – Band 8 (Strong)
The diagram illustrates the stages involved in generating electricity through the use of solar panels. Overall, the process consists of a series of linear steps, beginning with the absorption of sunlight and ending with the distribution of electricity to domestic users and the national grid.
Initially, solar panels absorb sunlight and convert it into direct current electricity. This current is then transferred to an inverter, where it is transformed into alternating current suitable for household use. Following this stage, the electricity is supplied to homes, while any surplus energy is transmitted to the national grid for wider distribution.
🔍 تفاوت‌ها کجاست؟ (تحلیل فارسی با اشاره به متن)
1️⃣ Overview
در Band 5: “Overall, there are several steps in this process.” این جمله فقط می‌گوید «چند مرحله هست»؛ هیچ ساختار یا جهت فرآیند را مشخص نمی‌کند.
در Band 8: “Overall, the process consists of a series of linear steps, beginning with… and ending with…” اینجا:
نوع فرآیند (linear)
نقطه شروع
نقطه پایان
همه در Overview مشخص شده‌اند.
2️⃣ استفاده از Passive Voice (خیلی مهم در Process)
Band 5:
بیشتر active: “the sunlight goes…” “people use…”
Band 8:
passive طبیعی: “is generated” “is transferred” “is supplied” “is transmitted”
📌 این دقیقاً یکی از معیارهای Band 7+ است.
3️⃣ دقت واژگان فنی
Band 5:
کلمات کلی: “energy” “changes the energy” “used by people”
Band 8:
واژگان دقیق: “direct current” “alternating current” “absorption” “surplus energy” “distribution”

4️⃣ انسجام و ترتیب مراحل
Band 5:
مراحل مشخص‌اند، اما اتصال ضعیف است
Linking ساده: “then”, “after that”
Band 8:
ترتیب دقیق و آکادمیک: “Initially” “This current is then transferred…” “Following this stage…”
5️⃣ Task Achievement
Band 5:
فرآیند توضیح داده شده
ولی تحلیل سطحی و زبان محدود
Band 8:
همه مراحل اصلی پوشش داده شده
Overview دقیق
زبان مخصوص Process Diagram